![]() The very first sentence is far too long & unwieldy.Everything in the lead needs to be expanded on in the article, so there needs to be something about the allusions to The Wizard of Oz - taken from an appropriate source, with references of course. It needs to summarise the rest of the article, which it doesn't at the moment. They should really illustrate some critical commentary or something from the film, not just illustrate the film itself. You may run into trouble trying to get this to GA or FA if you don't demonstrate exactly why these images are important to the article. The one of Lynch & Dafoe is presumably not from the film itself, yet appears to be. The screenshots you have used need to state on the image page where you gt them from.Although, I don't know if the fact that they're not on imdb means that the film didn't get a theatrical release in those countries. And it would be great if you could find release dates for Canada, UK, NZ. Add the realease date for Australia, as it's an English-speaking country too.I would lose the flag icons per WP:MOSFILM. ![]() Under "stars" I would just have Cage and Dern, since they are the names that appear on the poster.( talk) 08:40, 30 December 2007 (UTC) Reply Belovedfreak Any comments or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. A lot of work has gone into this article to improve it with the hopes of achieving a GA status soon.
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